IT’S ALL IN THE DETAILS Session 3: Point of View and Dialogue

Welcome to session three! This is the place to learn about characters’ perspectives and how they speak. 

Part 1: Point of View

Lorna and Adrian explore different perspectives from which a story can be told, including first, second, and third person.  

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EXERCISE: Walk a Mile in Someone Else’s Shoes (10 minutes)

Choose a public figure and change one major quality about them. This public figure could be an actor, politician, YouTuber…

From their perspective, free write one of the following:

  • An acceptance speech
  • An apology video
  • A letter to a fan

Pay attention to things like word choice, tone, and how they see the world around them.


Part 2: What to Say…

Lorna and Adrian take you through how characters’ speech patterns should work and explore how character motivations impact dialogue.  

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Part 3: Breaking Down the Layers

Lorna and Adrian examine how subtext worked in The Hunger Games example. 

EXERCISE: A Confrontational Conversation (10 minutes)

Write a conversation between one of the following sets of two characters:

  • A mean boss and their assistant
  • Feuding/estranged relatives at a family dinner
  • Strangers trapped in an elevator
  • Rivals trapped in an elevator
  • Two significant others breaking up 
  • OR any two characters of your own devising! Feel free to use your protagonist and antagonist from last session’s exercises.

WRAP UP

Congratulations on completing session three! Remember that what a character says isn’t always what they mean. In session four, you’ll learn about sensory details and revising your work. Get ready to break out your red pen!